Write a quick and easy tag line/slogan for my fitness business! [LESS THAN 10-15 WORDS]

• Status: Closed
• Prize: $50
• Entries Received: 99
• Winner: VLGood7318

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Contest Brief

Hello. I am looking to attract my ideal client/customer to my fitness business with some tag lines and slogans. Prize will be rewarded to the tag line that best represents my business' values. Also, FUTURE WORK is possible if you do good enough work -(see attachment)-
Note: If you read my FUTURE WORK document and give me a few ideas you have in mind for my future work, it will better your chance of winning the contest PRIZE.

---What I want:---
The first tagline I need is a very short statement that will give my customers hope and faith for the future. This must be a statement that creates a vision that will get my customers excited to take action.
I want to be able to end emails and marketing videos with:
"And remember, [your tagline]"
So if the tagline were "You will have your dream body very soon", which is a bad tag line but just used as an example, I would end my email with,
"And remember, You will have your dream body very soon"
This tag line gives people hope for the future like I am wanting, but I need something that is less generic and more creative.
A tagline that I've been using lately is "Be the exception" but that statement focuses on self-improvement and I want this statement to focus on the future.

---My company---
[NOTE: My company name, website, and Facebook are in the FUTURE WORK attachment]
-I have a newsletter called The Alliance, which to me is an alliance of fitness people who are working together to build their dream body. We help each other out, we encourage one another, and we share all of our secrets and tips with one another. So the main VALUE with the newsletter is to spread the knowledge and inspire others.
-A huge value of my fitness business is setting bigger goals to become better than average. I do not want mediocre results from my customers and I don't want people who give up after a week into their workout program. Here is a direct line from one of my emails:
"I want YOU to become better than average. Whatever your goal is, I want you to think much much bigger! If you have a weak goal like to just look okay with your shirt off, then change that! Turn that goal into "I want to look amazing with my shirt off. I want to love the way I look when I see myself in the mirror. 99% of people settle for average and never achieve their goals. Be the exception and exceed the standard. Set and CRUSH massive goals that will give you a feeling of great pride. Goals so massive it would scare away the average person."

-I specialize in helping skinny guys build muscle without getting fat, even if they've been skinny all their life.
-My audience is frustrated with all of the workout plans out there that are mostly for burning fat and losing weight and they feel left out as if there isn't a solution to their problem.

Fore more info, see attachment.


EDIT:
I've got an idea that really speaks my message. "Surpass the Standard"
So I would like a tagline that says "Your future is bright when you are surpassing the standard today"
"And remember... When you surpass the standard today, your dream body will be your reward in the future"

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