Edit Sales Page For Conversion

Completed Posted Jul 17, 2015 Paid on delivery
Completed Paid on delivery

Hello I am looking for a sassy online marketer / writer who can help me with editing and advice to improve lead conversion of the attached page [url removed, login to view]

I DO NOT want the piece to appear too sales-ey. Feeling I am looking for is warm and encouraging.

My concern for this page is:

- Too copy heavy

- Not punchy enough

- Not focussed on deliverables / benefits

- Too busy

Sales Page can be build on:

- A Leadpages template;

- Infusionsoft; or

- Adapted from current website

(build not required, just direction)

I am looking for someone who can provide a critical eye and develop 1-2 lead page options for split testing. If successful there may be more critiquing work for the program.

SOME MORE BACKGROUND INFO (in addition to the information on the current page)

The five day course will help people:

- Identify and develop a story idea

- Structure the story

- Organise thoughts

- Develop critical writing skills and process

- Motivate towards a consistent writing pattern

It is for people who:

- Have moderate to advanced writing skills

- Have a story to be told

- Have always wanted to write a book but never known where to start

TITLE SHOULD READ 'CRITIQUE SALES PAGE FOR CONVERSION'

Copywriting Leads Marketing Online Writing Website Design

Project ID: #8089377

About the project

3 proposals Remote project Active Jul 17, 2015

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alexandrulz

Hello, I don't know if you remember me, we worked on one of your paste projects (an international marketing campaign). I read the page you need edited & I have some ideas on how to get more conversions out of it. I More

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