Hi,
I have gone through your message. I understand what you want. What I don't know is which aspect of life your platform tries to educate its audience? Digital marketing, online Uni? Your content was vague in this regard.
Here is how my content is:
1. Grammatically correct.
2. Informative
3. Friendly, and could possess a bit of personality
4. Laced with practical examples
5 No passives
6. Short sentences.
7. Punctuation correct.
8. No plagiarism.
Earnestly, I look forward to your reply.