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Contest Entry #10 for                                                 Design Brochure for sales mobile application

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  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    We globally like the design. Good job.
    There are, however, some improvements to do as indicated in the comments

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    We prefer a big white text, with no container

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Need to align the texts and graphics.

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    add step's numbers

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    There's no need for this second part of the page. It is a repetition of the first one.

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Replace with a man as sales man

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    The background is too white. Add a soft background

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    The background is nice. We prefer to use a sales man photo (they are the target of the brochure).

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Find a way for this to not be isolated from other graphics

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    We don't like the blue container.

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    We don't like the blue container.

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    We don't like the blue container.

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Respect the color chart for graphics and images, especially their backgrounds

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Use only icons of Facebook and Whatsupp

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    there's no need to put these lines here

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    This leads to a misunderstanding. by keep in touch we mean notifying the client of new products, not an exchange or chat.
    So replace with an illustration that matches more the idea of notification

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    this is too white

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    "Free for ..." should be more visible and highlighted, especially the word "FREE".
    May be extend the blue container, and use bigger font size

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    "Usage restricted ..." should be more visible and highlighted

    • 6 years ago

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