Banner Ad Design for Shopfront - Lightbox Banner Design

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  angelabreyes

  • 11 years ago

  stil now winner?

  • 11 years ago
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     Anmech

     • 11 years ago

     it's been 6 days already

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  Anmech

  • 11 years ago

  have a look at #61 included the mock up

  • 11 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 11 years ago

     It does look good thanks !

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     Anmech

     • 11 years ago

     thanks

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  Contest Holder

  • 11 years ago

  #52 wow thanks for that - looks cool how you've done that to the real shopfront :-)
  
  Thanks to all the designs so far everyone it is looking great. Its tough but we are getting there. Can't wait to pick a designer!!

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     Contest Holder

     • 11 years ago

     #58 this border is horrible lol sorry...

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     ykumar85

     • 11 years ago

     i think #56 and #57 is nice.

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  angelabreyes

  • 11 years ago

  please check #60 . note that this is only a sample photo of a store in a street so you can picture how will it look like if installed already. if you have any revisions, let me know. thanks. :)

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  ykumar85

  • 11 years ago

  somebody is copying my idea

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  angelabreyes

  • 11 years ago

  hi logislate! please see #53 , address on top banner is white and bigger. viet translations bigger. layout more classy, simple and straight to the point. thanks.

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  ykumar85

  • 11 years ago

  my entry 51 will look like this #52

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  ykumar85

  • 11 years ago

  pls see #50 and #51.

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  ykumar85

  • 11 years ago

  Please give me your valuable feedback on my entries #39, #40, #41, #42, #43, #44, #45, #46, #47

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     Contest Holder

     • 11 years ago

     ykumar85: #39 - the arrows look funny! makes it look very cluttered. I am liking everything else in terms of spacing, font, not sure about the border. The border does fit but not sure on that design.

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     ykumar85

     • 11 years ago

     pls see #50, this is revised.

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  jhharoon

  • 11 years ago

  your feedback is require.

  • 11 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 11 years ago

     jhharoon: What are the difference with all your submissions? Please let me know cause it all looks the same. Not really a fan of the gradient colours in the font, I think that won't turn out nicely on print.

     • 11 years ago
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  angelabreyes

  • 11 years ago

  hi logislate! please check #28 . a revised version of #20 and #21 . i used a lighter shade of gold for the text and the english and viet translations' spacing was changed so that it'll be read easily. i also made #24 and #25 with a border and background though i suggest to use a simpler and cleaner layout like #28 .

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     Contest Holder

     • 11 years ago

     Thank you

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  ykumar85

  • 11 years ago

  Please give me your valuable feedback on my entries #34, #35, #36, #37

  • 11 years ago
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  hmwijaya

  • 11 years ago

  Hi logicstate, I am wondering what is the exact measurement for the top light box? Seems like everyone here submitting different size for the top light box (some wider than other). If it's really 5000mm x 60mm then the top light box should be much much bigger than the side columns...
  Thank you!

  • 11 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 11 years ago

  nDmB: #23 , impressive! As much as I love the angelabreyes designs your mockup is attractive due to the following reasons 1) nicer font colour, the gold is good 2) the writing on the columns is easy to read and spread out however design #20 and #21 has the fonts squashed together and makes it look very modern *tough decision!!!* I do like the borders that you've put together but not sure if it will look good printed...
  
  Note to ALL, the banner on #23 is the most easiest to read and most attractive! Good work!

  • 11 years ago
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  angelabreyes

  • 11 years ago

  hi, just a thought, you might want to see a different color. please see #22 :)

  • 11 years ago
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  angelabreyes

  • 11 years ago

  hi! i made 3 new studies for you to choose from. i decided to use light color that is between yellow and white since i consider that it's a lightbox. it's better to use light colors contrast to the red background.
  
  #19 -- i used light yellow for the store name and viet and english translations. with this, i think the light will shine through it better than the gold/dark yellow.
  
  #20 -- i used light yellow and white. light will definitely pass through it 100%
  
  #21 -- just like #10 i just made the yellow color more gold-ish. :)
  
  let me know if you have any other suggestions.

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  Contest Holder

  • 11 years ago

  angelabreyes: I do like #10 the most so far. Its got a mix of everything (chinese, vietnamese, english, shop name) but doesn't look too cluttered either. Agree that red background would look better. With regards to the yellow text, do you think its too yellow? Although it might turn out good once the fluorescent light shines through it, would you be able to try turn it to a gold/ beige or even white? Would white writing as the dominant text colour be ideal?
  
  How about the Red, do you think it needs to be any lighter or darker? Just trying to picture it with light shining through it, perhaps a shade or two darker?
  
  On the top banner, the Hang Seng Herbal Centre still doesn't stand out enough... however not entirely sure what can be done... : /
  
  kshevitskiy: The measurement for the left column is 2500mm x 410mm and the right column is 2500 x 330mm
  
  Cheers!

  • 11 years ago
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  angelabreyes

  • 11 years ago

  hi! please check #10. this is a revised version of #1. for me, it's ok to use red background instead of white to make it more "catchy" to the eyes of the people passing through the store. I removed the chinese characters on the top banner since it's already present on the right side with the viet. and the english translation on the left side. I think that's better to make it more organize and not to create confusion because of repitition. it's better if we just put the store name and address on the top banner to make it simplier and the people will be focused on it once they saw it.

  • 11 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 11 years ago

  To ALL Designers, can you please make sure you keep in mind that this design will be PRINTED on laminate. So any special effects might look good on computer but might turn out bad on print.
  
  Thank you

  • 11 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 11 years ago

  angelabreyes: can you please put design #1 and #2 back? They were good... Let me give you guys more feedback tonight!

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  kshevitskiy

  • 11 years ago

  hi logicscate! i made top banner (#9) if you like this and really interested in my work i can make another banners (vertical columns)
  btw, what size of vertical columns should be?
  thank you

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  angelabreyes

  • 11 years ago

  hi sir/mam. ive made 5 new studies. i applied your revisions in #4. other choices are #5, #6, #7, and #8. i just want you to have more choices. :)

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  Contest Holder

  • 11 years ago

  also is it possible to make the top banner more stand out? The writing maybe needs to be bigger? Maybe take away the chinese writing on top? And leave it for the sides only?
  The eyes are not focused on the top banner at the moment.... hope this feedback is welcomed!

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     angelabreyes

     • 11 years ago

     alright. will do something about it. thanks!

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  Contest Holder

  • 11 years ago

  angelabreyes: Thanks for the post!! #1 looks great! Please keep it there. I have some suggestions which are
  1) Can you try make the background colours white and the rest red and gold?
  2) The top banner needs to be cleaner so the writing in the corners need to be moved, can they be moved somewhere else?
  3) What other suggestions do you have? Do you need anymore writing?
  
  With regards to #2, the red dark shadows looks great but I think once printed will look dull and won't turn out nice.
  
  Open for suggestions everyone!!!
  
  Thanks

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     angelabreyes

     • 11 years ago

     will send the revised layout asap. thanks for the feedback :)

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  angelabreyes

  • 11 years ago

  hi sir/mam. please see #1 and #2. thanks

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  angelabreyes

  • 11 years ago

  will send my entry in a bit!

  • 11 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 11 years ago

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  • 11 years ago

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