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Sales Mobile Application Brochure

Hi, this is for all of the updated designs. You can swipe right to view all the samples. Also, you can check all the designs in pdf format from my google drive folder here : https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4Kvrjg8QVpASmQ4MkFLR19DNWM

Contest Entry #41 for                                                 Design Brochure for sales mobile application

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  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Try, if possible, to replace with a more representative image

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Can you please remove the shadow of the text ?

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Align with the image of step 2

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Why two hands ? I think i understand what you mean, bu this could be confusing.
    I think you should change this : hands of the same person (shopper) and add an icon of a notification of new products.

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    I suggest to reduce a little bit the size of the text

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Page margin too small

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Do not use cut images

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    I suggest to not use italic and reduce a little bit the size of the text, and add the following image or an equivalent
    https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0GNqXlaR4jZeTF2cHAybWplR1E/view?usp=sharing

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    we feel some monotony in this page. I suggest you give it some vitality by changing the background. Try a mix of graduated blue, gray and white.

    You can also play with text colors.

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    we feel some monotony in this page. I suggest you give it some vitality by changing the background. Try a mix of graduated blue, gray and white.

    You can also play with text colors.

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    we feel some monotony in this page. I suggest you give it some vitality by changing the background. Try a mix of graduated blue, gray and white.
    You can also play with text colors.

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    I suggest you reduce the size of the screenshot. It is too large

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Can you please replace this with the screenshot listing the products ?

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    I suggest to expand a little bit the image to make it more readable

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    I suggest you reduce the size of the screen shots, and make some space

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Dedicate a footer to put contact details (phone number, email address..)

    • 6 years ago
  • relalaoui
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    I suggest to reduce the size of the text, and add some representative icons or images

    • 6 years ago
  • AthurSinai
    AthurSinai
    • 6 years ago

    https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4Kvrjg8QVpASmQ4MkFLR19DNWM

    • 6 years ago
  • AthurSinai
    AthurSinai
    • 6 years ago

    this link for pdf format:

    • 6 years ago

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